|Reviews for Where Time Stands Still|
| Voilee chapter 10 . 5/5/2007
My goodness . . . what talent you have! Lovely work. There are a few errors and a few confusing things, but otherwise it is quite good. I would suggest finding a beta to make it gold! Keep it up.
| lazarus-writer chapter 13 . 10/29/2005
This is just a kind keep up the good work review. Your story is very good and it is unlucky so few people have read it, coz if they did it'd get more rviews
| The-Writer's-Ghost chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Hey, Evan. It's been a while but I finally got around to reading your story (or at least the prologue-I downloaded the rest to read later). I like the way it's going. There's a few gramatical errors and silly things but it's really good! Oh, this is James by the way. I'll review again when I've read all the other chapters. Keep it going!
| like it chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
I like to read. As far as the storyline go. I enjoy many different of all I enjoyed the style in the way tthe story is written. I likeyour style very much. Your storyline is of a Japanese Japanese have a tea ceremony. It is very elaborate and verydetailed.
There was the Japanese guard who protected the had a lot of tattoos. They were in training from the time they werefive years old. It was all about honor. Just like a tea story was a little bit inconsistent with the idea. But I wish to tell you it was very well written I enjoy your style of as you continue to develop your storylines an will probably be an excellent writer