Reviews for sunwarmed stone
Amadea chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
i'm just gonna add it to favs, cause i can't think of a good review
whyette chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
It was definately an interesting piece. It didn't feel very poetic, though... It felt more like flash fiction. It just didn't seem very poetic at all. It was definately interesting...

-Whyette
Manju chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
wow, good message in this poem. um, spelling mistake: "more THEN that" should be "more THAN that". and i don't know if u wanted the ending like that cuz it seems like you missed a word or something in "it lingered on my tired brown, lingered like a kiss." ..."tired brown" what? besides that, great job!