Reviews for this is someone else's guilt
forever fallen chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This has always been one of my favorites of yours, it flows so naturally. It resonates on such a deep level, and so beautiful like the way ashes look before you reach out to capture their beauty. Only this doesn't leave powder in between the spirals on your fingertips.
Tikklz chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
I can't even take it...my god, I didn't know there was poetry that was this good. Everything you write is my favorite poem.
euphemismsforlukewarmtragedies chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
this is beautiful.

"like the way you speak to ghosts when you should be doing laundry." that is a most amazing line. story on faves ]
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
"you cling to him like wet velvet" imagery,this piece is utterly perfect.I adore the last stanza too-and your metaphors were original and amazing.
addie pray chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
This flowed beautifully. "even as it stains your mouth, regret is a word you never knew" - I love it.
Caitlyn Lennon chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
wow this is really good ! i really like it!
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
fantastic, wonderful imagery you have there. really very very good! vivid and catchy, (i dunno why i find it catchy but some of these lines are sticking to me like your wet velvet.) -The lady Elaine
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
the last stanza is amazing! pure perfection this is!

~* noelle
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
The depth of this astounds me~~ Great job!

keep writing!
account not in use chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
you cling to him like wet velvet.-love that line. the last stanza blew me away. It was so...out there...if that makes sense .
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
the last stanza is gorgeous! it makes me think 'vain' but i don't know if that's completly true; probably not at all, just what i was thinking.

anyways, lovely poem!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
I find this fascinating, the choice of words is wonderful.
smile persephone chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
That was damn perfection.

'you cling to him like wet velvet' & 'your last moment is red wine sour' Love those parts!

I wish I could give a better review, but I am so drained right now. My apologies.