|Reviews for this is someone else's guilt|
| forever fallen chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This has always been one of my favorites of yours, it flows so naturally. It resonates on such a deep level, and so beautiful like the way ashes look before you reach out to capture their beauty. Only this doesn't leave powder in between the spirals on your fingertips.
| Tikklz chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
I can't even take it...my god, I didn't know there was poetry that was this good. Everything you write is my favorite poem.
| euphemismsforlukewarmtragedies chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
this is beautiful.
"like the way you speak to ghosts when you should be doing laundry." that is a most amazing line. story on faves ]
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
"you cling to him like wet velvet" imagery,this piece is utterly perfect.I adore the last stanza too-and your metaphors were original and amazing.
| addie pray chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
This flowed beautifully. "even as it stains your mouth, regret is a word you never knew" - I love it.
| Caitlyn Lennon chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
wow this is really good ! i really like it!
| Haberdasher chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
fantastic, wonderful imagery you have there. really very very good! vivid and catchy, (i dunno why i find it catchy but some of these lines are sticking to me like your wet velvet.) -The lady Elaine
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
the last stanza is amazing! pure perfection this is!
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
The depth of this astounds me~~ Great job!
| account not in use chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
you cling to him like wet velvet.-love that line. the last stanza blew me away. It was so...out there...if that makes sense .
| lackluster chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
the last stanza is gorgeous! it makes me think 'vain' but i don't know if that's completly true; probably not at all, just what i was thinking.
anyways, lovely poem!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
I find this fascinating, the choice of words is wonderful.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
That was damn perfection.
'you cling to him like wet velvet' & 'your last moment is red wine sour' Love those parts!
I wish I could give a better review, but I am so drained right now. My apologies.