|Reviews for Laughter|
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Quick and intense.
| drblueface chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
1-flows well, good rhythm, good rhymes.
2-rhyme is getting a bad rap these days in favour of a more contemporary unrhyming style, which is odd, if you think about it, because very few people look back upon renaissance artwork and remark at how crappy it is.-so great job! _
3-standing in the face of false positives is tough.
4-keep it up! _