Reviews for Our Midnight Playground
indiana chapter 5 . 8/20/2016
When is going to school early for her? But loving the book!
Guest chapter 20 . 7/28/2016
great story but finished a little quickly
RubyRed22 chapter 7 . 9/14/2012
eiyuang999 chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
hi !

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Audrey Storm chapter 9 . 4/27/2010
lol nice one "for our wedding night" !
Audrey Storm chapter 3 . 4/27/2010
Yay Donovan !
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 21 . 4/13/2009
Aww, poor Scarlett!

Great story, although it was a bit fast...

I loved it! Donovan sounds adorable.
adnama3121 chapter 9 . 2/15/2009
Did you change Nikki's last name? Wasn't it something like D'Ambruzzi or something? Why is it Sanders now?

slee5133 chapter 11 . 12/5/2008
hey, love the story so far, but im just wondering, doesn't ellie walk to school everyday? why can't she walk home? and didn't you mention in a few chapters before this that donovan caught the bus to school, if he did, why would he be driving home? and on the day of ellie and donovan's 'date' you said 11.15pm instead of am. sorry, just a few errors that bugged me.
I Murder on Impulse chapter 21 . 11/17/2008
fantastic story!
AbbeyEileen chapter 5 . 10/25/2008
So, as much as I am trying to be patient, I just can't read any more of this story. There is no plot, just random characters randomly interacting. Grammar definitely needs to brushed up, but the point is, the story is just boring. The sentence structure never varies and the vocabulary leaves something to be desired.

Just wanted to give my opinion.
acatsrain chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
Um... doesn't Donovan have a car?
Miss. Paradox chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
*girly squeal*

I loved it. It was adorable! . One of those stories that give you that warm and fuzzy feeling inside, haha.

Anyways, great job! I'll be sure to check out your other stuff.
atreyu love chapter 20 . 9/8/2007
Dont you mean Scarlett and Brian? lolz.

i love the story!
atreyu love chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
i love the story!

reading next chap. now :)
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