my destiny is nowhere, yet you drive me farther away.

That was my favorite line.

Wonderful imagery, I could get a very clear picture of what was happening and yet could see the symbolism. Nice.

Cheers with a grand glass of strawberry sherry. (?)

S.P.

Yes, change often internal and deep within the soul.

Wonderful again...funny how I just got back from a road trip. I like the bigger picture you include in your writing...past the words. Great discription. Keep it up...I look forward to reading more.

OMG! I know the feeling hun... I'm a small town, country girl at heart and my grandma and her new husband tried to transplant me in Florida, not 15 miles outta Tampa...

Being a Kentucky girl that just didn't sit well with me and I was miserable! So after a year I moved back in with my parents, screw Florida, I'm happier in Indiana! Mostly because Kentucky is just a 2 hour drive away! o

Sad but lovely poem hun, especially since I was able to relate to it!