|Reviews for Emmaline|
| Jinger-Spice chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Very interesting piece. :)
| Ebony Stars chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
this is the fourth reason why you rock. I like the way you cut up words, its nice to see how they fit together :)
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
wow... this was very beautiful. i especially loved the unusual depictions - it echoes in my curls/The slur of cake-y, false sincerity... and the last few stanzas are just amazing... :
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
wow. this was so amazing i'm pretty much speechless. wonderful job. . . this was just so real, so there... i felt like i was there. i liked how you took the words & turned them into different words/shortened them to make diff. words... great job.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Such a play on words you accomplish.
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
love the ending line. theres something about this...incredible. it really scribbles out the emotions so vividly. fantastic, even.
| like a lover chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
oh my god, this was so so great. I adoreed "PRESSING. PRESSING. PRESSING.", it just sounded so perfect and paranoid to me. this was deliciously different. a little mind-blowing. :D
| B. M. Reed chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
fantasies are fun. great poem!
| solitaire-for-two chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
I adore your use of text styles and spacing to enhance the effects of this piece. Awesome.
'Slimy'. Eugh. Just that word gives me the shivers.
This is intense. Nice work.
| twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
| lackluster chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
the format is very rough. it would seem a bit overdone, but i think it goes great with the words. wonderful!
| Chase William chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Intersesting begining-I WILL keep reading!
Speaking of "Emmaline", I knew someone from camp named Emmaline...never thought I'd see the name again. Heh.