aw.

beautiful...

i love your insights on life,

your snapshots of moments.

awsome poem

also i just wanted to shout UR AWSOME i read your reply to is god? and i agree with you i have have friends who are wiccan and so on ecct. awsome

ok i probably just annoyed you but i'm done now

i wish u luck on your writing!

I love the verbs in the last two lines "disregarded" and "smiled." They depicted the character so eloquently.

Simple, yet rich in imagery and detail. Every line has something to add. Cheerful and very well written.

I really love this! I can pretty much see the photo. Cheers to you!

Aw. Beautiful liitle piece, it really brought a smile to my face. Keep writing.