THE NARRATOR IS ALREADY DEAD AND IS A GHOST STALKING A WOMAN! AH!

The ending could not have been better.

Congratulations. Thanks to your choice of words in this poem, you have in fact convinced me that I am in fact a stalker.

Keep up the perfect poetry.

Great poem – especially the rhyming words. For some reason it reminded me of a musical though... (Take it in as a good thing) I was actually singing it when I was reading it.

The words flowed; the rhythm was excellent, the word use was spectacular (from beginning to end); to sum it all up it was marvelous. Compared to some other poems I read about, this is in the range of my top 3. I’d say, the best part was the ending, for me, it’s usually doesn’t have a ring to it, but this poem did.

Keep writing!