Update pls! this is a great story!

Firstly, I love your penname! Secondly, I really like this start. The description of the main character in the first paragraph was perfect; just how I imagine a spy (?) of her time might look. And I really like the interactions between him and her, whoever they are-I'm sure I'll find out as i read along though. Lastly, the length of this chapter was perfect in my opinion. I've gotta go read more!

i like this story it is really good. that was a really fast responce to my review. wow. the character you have created are great and i can wait to see how they develope over time.

seems like a good start. so why did she leave 5 years ago and why did she come back?