|Reviews for Elements|
| Saint Mo Kai chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Nice rhyme, it flows nicely.
| Oriel Black chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Straberi: this poem could have been good...but then you started doing the rhyming thing like everyone else. poetry does not have to rhyme. and the line: "With temperatures very hot" just didn't fit. I just didn't like it.
dracula: i'm sorry i wasn't listening to my friend as she read this poem for i was jazzersizing three feet away and it all passed right through me like a midnight gay ghost. so...i can't exactly review you now can i? nope.