Reviews for dreamscape
flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
I LOVE! *applauds loudly* I love the way your wrote it and it's flow. F*cking awesome job.

Shavo
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Your poems are fun because, well, what I do is read the whole thing without the parantheses, and then go back and read it again with them. It really makes you appreciate it more...or something. Too early to be articulate. I like this very much, and I think the title fits it perfectly.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
I love the "oracular poetry"
these travels chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
i love your poetry.

marry me?hahaha.

:)
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
love the repition to 'keep breathing', a creepy and fantastic poem. lovely styling and just unique portrayl.

* noelle
addie pray chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
This was kinda creepy. I liked it. Interesting, yes, very much so. Loved: the repetition of 'keep breathing'.
a moth in lace chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Every bit of this was so impactful. I would say that it is emotional, but it's not. It seems kind of numb, but that suits it. It merited a few reads, though, to soak it all in. "this alphabet (internal) stringing syllables like / oracular poetry / keep breathing. keep breathing." That is just amazing. Great piece. Keep writing.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
very cool.. love the last two lines
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Interesting. I like.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
another excellently writen poem your style impresses me

keep writing!