Reviews for Candlelight
m chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
it is nice and gentle but i do not understand. more straightforwardness needed if u want your reader to get involved really.
grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
I like the concept of your poem, but it's quite confusing because you haven't expanded on it properly... The second line throws the meaning off - why the paper? And where does this 'dousing of fire' suddenly come into things? You presume too much of your reader, and in doing that, you cripple the would-be brilliance of your own candle.
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
m very nice. hot chicks rule.