|Reviews for Not Of This World|
| FIREBRAVE chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
I like this one-one of my favs. I also am prou Christian.
This was written very well.
Keep up the great work!
| sakine chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
very nicely written! beautiful and clear - I really like it!
| InDoveNguyen chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Why does it seem that all christians want is to be dominated by some intangible being? To be ruled, and obey, and bow and scrape.
| For the Kingdom chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
| 1941 chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Believing that you are not of this world really is not a very healthy outlook on life nor is yearning for death, which really is what you are doing. I really didn’t get a rhythm or flow to this at all. I am not sure if the jarring quality of its sound was intentional, because I don’t think that it suited the subject very well.
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
After reading this poem, I have something to say to the reviewer before me: WHAT THE HECK? BEING PROUD TO BE A CHRISTIAN IS NOT A SIN AND NEVER WAS! It's just the same as saying "Proud to be American" , 'cept better.
Anyway, to the author: YES! This poem is great! Doesn't rhyme but has a great them. Are you ever going to write rhyming poems? They might turn out good.
| djsaxon2 chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
You know you seem to be doing an awful lot of talking how much of an amazing child of God and 't forget, pride is a sin.