Reviews for Noontimes at the Lake
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Wow, that is incredibly romantic. *sigh* I wish it was me! And, okay, I'm sorry, but the whole 'break' thing totally reminded me of Friends. And I don't even watch Friends that much. Not a bad thing, just an observation, lol. Keep writing! :)
Lines To Time chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Aw (if fictionpress erases all those w's I'll eat it). This poem makes me all gooey on the inside. Aw, I loved this. It's so adorable and feel-good and wonderfully written and I just *love* poems like these, they make me all squishy with joy. :-P
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Bittersweet and happy, paints a beautiful picture of an interesting reality. "Don't go" I love how you worked up to that, tying it in the end. Wonderful piece.
La Gitane chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
I love the fragmented sense to this, it gives the poem a great effect. The little details are also very nice, and contribute to the slightly bitty feel of this poem. The first line is also a very good choice for opening - well done! :)