Reviews for In the Back of my Mind
Sabrina Love chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
im glad Jay-Ling recommended u
Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
this is really straight from your heart... good job!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Hi Jo, how are you? I'd love to hear from you sometime! _ Great poem, well done! Keep writing!

~Anna~
beti213 chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
hmph. I don't necessarily agree with the potential accuracy of the last statement... but otherwise, this poem completely hit home for me. I love the stream of consciousness style and how you split words up, making it seem choppy and a little fitful. my only suggestion is to perhaps link a potent image to this... it's good as is but if you add a vivid image, it will be more memorable to a reader. just a thought. well done.