Reviews for Him, Her and I
lxpetrik chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
It was overall good. A good concept, good visuals but stay away from rhyming for only a few lines, it's more or less distracting. Find a patten and stick to it.
Just me.Jessie B chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
hey Siobhan,remember me? great poem...i have some new ones up too...you should have a look...we havent talked in a while...email me..

jessicawhat is love but a game?
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Powerful detail and imagry, I enjoyed the read, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.