Reviews for Rainstorm
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Wow, very descriptive and nice. _
Master Bates chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
This one does not seem to match your writing style, but still a good poem.
Ceri.17 chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
Great imagery and diction!
Jeremy Kerley chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
You did a good job with the adjitives, but I did not like this poem as much. (no rhymeing)
Archipelago chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Oh, very descriptive. I can see each image vividly. The last lines are just perfect. Although, in line 33 from the bottom tickly is supposed to be tickle i think. And as the other reviewer asked: how'd the contest go? I think ya did a wonderful job.
Aryanda chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
this is good stuff. how'd you do in the contest? I like how the rain is referred to as a army of gray and silver. *sighs* i like the rain...