wow, christina, you are seriously the most talented writer i know. i read that and i cried. it was so touching and so true but you're the only person i know who can put it into words with so much power like that. seriously, it was amazing.

very realistic,i'd be sad if it were it is also extremely well-written,well done.

E~Ebony.

The hopelessness of the narration evokes strong emotion from the reader to symphathize with them. The narrator is resigned to death and the recollections you mention as "their life flashes before their eyes" are easy to relate to. A very believable piece. Well done!

aw...that sad if it were tru. u must've gotten a good grade for that.