oh bloody hell is though his mind

he would have died if that was my friend

-lover girl's twin

That was a surprising end to the date, but I had to laugh at the way Kee dealt with Trevor. I like that he can handle himself.

really good story but it seems like you rushes joeys and kee's relationship.

Aw, Kee should've listened to Joey! I think I believe him.

Something is really fishy about that guy, but I can't put my finger on it! it's just too perfect, something has to happen or their wouldn't be a story here! :P

I really like that he has a protective best friend who is not in love with him and vice versa! It's such a breath of fresh air, as that never happens. One is always secretly in love with the other, yada yada. I approve. :)

OMG I kept waiting and waiting, expecting each guy to be "the one." I really thought the second one was for sure, the dark and handsome one. Damn! Was I wrong. This new guy seems amazing. I love Kee's shocked reaction. Hahahahaha.

Hi, I really like how your story is going! The characters are great and the plot line is moving along just swimmingly. :) I hope that this story continues, great work. :D

I had to look up Travis Fimmel. Hot! (at least with long hair)

Was waiting for Tommy to find out! Loved this scene muchos.

He really is like a dad. Now, if lauren and tommy ever have a kid... ;D

And I did say I was going to go back and review some... this was afterall one of my favorite stories i just had too. Hope I'm not bothering too much by jumping chapters haha!

I knew Trevor was suspicious... xD

Which was also why I got a little nervous about joey too ! haha

LOL Oh, I love the genie that you created... He's so weird and interesting. Lauren and Tommy make a good couple.

At first I thought he was going to get with the waiter but I'm glad he didn't since he had joey waiting for him! :D

I read this a few weeks ago and it's my favorite story. I just never got the chance to review, because I read from my phone instea d of my laptop.

Anyway, this was seriously one of my favorites 3 I had to come back and review just to get that out there xD I want to review every chapter but i feel a bit awkward that it might be a bother... lol.

When I saw your review on one of my stories, i almost died from excitement haha i see your name everywhere on fp.. not being a creeper or anything ehehh.. :P

I'm so so happy that kee and joey had a happy ending! i got nervous during that fight for a second lol and was soo suspicious in the beginning when he showed up out of nowhere just for kee xD yay!

Lol, you should be! It's amazing! (; x