Reviews for Crepe
The Watched chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
I love this: I think it's just brilliant. The first and last stanzas are, I think, my favourite. It's quite...quite...well, gripping, and intriguing, and yeah, unnerving. And the final line is the killer, I tell thee, the absolute killer.
FrozenKiwi chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Chills all the way down my spine. Brilliant choice of words. Cheers to you! And danke schoen for the review!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
the wording is perfect in this. creating an uforgetable atmosphere that you can't shake off. lovely, lovely.

* noelle
breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
You don't know what this means to me. The last line makes it. Love your phrasing (bold nigh l)

-jess
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
that last line confused me, but i liked it other than that
Hilary chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
I love! Last line is where it all makes sense, I love it. *nod*
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Wow, this is very chilling. I like it.
vonlan chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
bwaha. this poem makes me laugh for a certain strange reason. i think its the fact that you said:

'moon's stuffed behind a bush;'

hahaha. STUFFED. very nice, very nice.

oh yes- i don't know what a duffbulb ispolaroid? was the person HOLDING a polaroid? paedophile... i know what a pedophile is... was discussing it earlier...

anyways, i like this poem, very nicely written. there's a bit that seems cut off, though. before the stanza that speaks about the eyes.

i suck at reviews.
Kristina chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
wo wow claire - tres tres bon! i love it! ive said it before - i'll say it again - fantastic job -! you have talent:)
TwystedFate chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
You have no. idea. how long I've been waiting for an update from you! This is amazing, I'm in awe. Lovely, lovely job.
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
oh its finally letting me review! :D ok so i love this and as i said before its definatly your masterpiece. i've fallen in love with your writing now that i'm rereading over this and your previous postings and you have to write and post more and i don't know what else to say because i'm speechless.
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
i adore your wording. something about the idea also fascinates me. unbelievable!
kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
i really don't know how you can write about serious things you've never been through (i hope) and still make it sound believeable. the whole poem doesn't come clear to me until end line. then its like ... that person used to be used to make childporn out of or something. auditorium dead makes me think something in the person died too. like beginning is past - end is present and they merge... the title is deceiving because i was thinking of crepes - you know the kind you eat? and yeah those are nice and yummy but this poem isn't about nice and yummy things, is it? P
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Haunting, shows a growth in thought and then a trembling stil in feelings.
Angelite chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
dude...that was good, I loved it. it was really pretty. you really do write good poetry, don't think anything different!
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