|Reviews for What If|
| ScarletDreamer chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Amazing, yet again. This, so far, i believe is one of your best poems I've read. :) Magnifique!
| Getuie chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
This poem reminded me of "What if His people prayed?" from Casting Crowns. I can see where you're coming from in writing this. I don't know why.. but I would like to see you do some nonrhyming poetry also. I know it's sometimes a challenge to work through, but I just have this feeling that you'll do very good at it. I think one thing that kinda took the impact away from this piece was the rhymning - at least for me. Not that it was bad, not at all. It posed strong questions that many of us need to think about *hugs*
This is from a Anti-Bush, Pro-life, Bring-God-Back-Into-Schools, Stop-Being-So-Bloody-Stubborn writer. (Sorry, I saw your previous writer and couldn't resist)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
I like it; it was a little on the frilly side for what you were trying to say, but I enjoyed 's my stand-up review is from an:Anti-BusherPro-AbortionerSave-The-PlantetGive-Poetry-To-Childrenwriter.