Reviews for The Tale of Two People
CK Shorty chapter 4 . 7/20/2006
Update soon! I'm really liking this story :o)!
Losuai chapter 4 . 5/30/2006
Aww, poor Theo. Nothing solves hangover except for not drinking so much in the first place...

Liked this chapter. Keep writing...
Losuai chapter 3 . 5/30/2006
Theo just likes to mess w/ people's minds doesn't she? The whore with a heart of gold! XD
Losuai chapter 2 . 5/29/2006
Crap! That is one hella of a twist. Very nice and descriptive. Keep going!
Losuai chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Graphic yes. But not REALLy graphic. I like the characters and plot already...

Isn't Theo a boy name?
SkepticCritic chapter 4 . 5/13/2006
Ah...That's so sweet...He gets mad 'cuz she came even though he was sick...It's really cute...He's all caring and...and...sweet...and...I don't know...It's really cute though...
CK Shorty chapter 3 . 5/12/2006
Theo seems to be a strong woman, but confused and alone :/ I like her though! And Jeorge seems really shy, but that's ok too. Doesn't matter, I still like the story and characters anyway!

CK Shorty chapter 2 . 5/12/2006
I really liked the first chapter and I like this one also. This story is off to a good start :) Keep up the good work! So far, so really good!

stanhops chapter 3 . 2/23/2006
I find this story very interesting so far, and although the heroine is a whore, I love Theo and think he is terribly sweet. Update soon
Skeptic-Critic chapter 3 . 2/21/2006
I completly confused myself...Instead of going to chapter three I accidently pushed the next chapter button and reread chapter two...i'm terribly intelligent sometimes...But actually after rereading chapter two, I wanted to tell you that I really like your use of larger words...Just kinda had to say it...Everyone uses small, easy words now and it's nice to find an author who's not afraid to use a bigger vocabulary...
punk-pwincess chapter 2 . 2/14/2006
's the continuation?
Skeptic-Critic chapter 2 . 12/19/2005
he's cute when he decides to be heroic and chivalrous and all that...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
lessen it? why?
xAce chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Keep up the good work :)
lindserly chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
it was graphic but i really don't think it was TOO graphic.

it's an interesting, original idea and i'd keep reading for sure if you update.
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