Reviews for You Never Came
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Short and to the point, very powerful, especially through the repetitions and thymes. I like it.
Live4Love chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
This relates to me more then i could tell you...except in my case it would have to be "you never came back". anyways great job in conveying feelings. thank you for the
Jezsh chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
this one has a really good flow, and unusual rhyme. Can imagine it to music. I like its simplicity and honesty.
Choke on this chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
ooh, accusations... think about adding more to this. it sounds like a song.
The Random Witness chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Short and sad. If more was added it could make a great song. Otherwise nice piece, and i like the simple ryhming scheme. ~TRW
SKgus chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
i like the flow of this one very muchkeep up the good work SKgus
nanashi-04 chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
sad. this is sad... Good poem...
FictionPressPenName chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
That was really sad. The title was great. It was a really good poem, but maybe it could do to be a little longer. Keep writing!
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
once again, very deep and emotional in a short poem. Lots of hatred towards whoever did this to you.

grl wit many thoughts chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
i hove it who is the one to blame though?
mormonboy chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
I love it. It is really terible when you want someone to pay attention or to come and visit with you and it just doesn't happen. It happens to me alot. I am always wishing that these people will, but often they never do, and it just makes you really depressed.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
I love this. It's so simply written..but so full of emotion. Wonderful job.

Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Heatfelt and wonderfully written. I love the structure of the poem.

Keep it up

Thanks for reviewing.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
wow, very heartfelt~~ the rhythm flowed~

keep writing!
Katy Llewellyn chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
thanks for the reviews. i really like "You Never Came" i think it is wonderful.
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