Reviews for The two of us alone
Clouden3 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
Now that was beautiful. Definitely left a sense of longing for me. And I enjoyed the rhytmic tone of the whole piece. Sorry I haven't been on in awhile. I'll post more poems soon, and I'm gonna read the rest of yours that I've missed. PEACE
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
That is wonderful...It has great emotion through the whole poem... Once again a job well done...
Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Great job on this I liked the detail...
Kenishiro chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Wow! I never try candlelight dinner, very romantic, huh? Perhaps I should try going for one, I love the way you end that poem, "Now what will we do", so ehem... What will you do... hehe ;P
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Great poem. It's good to see ya back and writing. Wish I could do the same. But writing has been hard since my grandmother passed away. Just having trouble getting over it. Great work tho. I love this. Keep it up!
bittersweet-vines chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
Nice poem-very cute and sweey _ keep it up! (i don't know if you accidentally capitalized the J in "Just me and you" or if it was on purpose, but anyway)_
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
very romantic and dreamy! thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
This is lovely, and very classy in the style that you did it. I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.