|Reviews for Heart|
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
wow...really good! I like the little line of "If only I hadn't fallenTripping over a single smile." I've never heard anyone use it like that before. very creative
| in theory chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Okay, you're on my favourites just because of this (though I like your other work a hell of a lot). And it's long overdue too, you're an awesome writer. Thanks for all your reviews, they mean a lot :) As you say, keep writing!
| Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
My favorite line has to be...
"This time around, I had to fight to reach shore."
I can really feel the scream and pain in that line for some reason. Nicely written.
| Jessie McKinnon chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
That poem is great, I can relate completely
| method acting chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Normally I don't go for this style...but this has to be one of the best angst-free-range peices I have read. Lovely job. I can't believe I got your age deadon. You do seem to have an air of expreiance about your words...how old do you tink I am (just by my works)?
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
good poem. there is too much of this in life. we all keep writing about it.
makes me want to stop writing recently.
| Infinite Abyss chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
| swift sky silver chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
i especially like the lines: 'If only I hadn’t fallenTripping over a single smile', and also the ending. it's interesting how you use embrace and then unbearable truth. a very honest piece. 0)
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Nice and sweet. I like the flow...keep on going!
| Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Very well done...
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
very well done.. I love the 3rd & 4th stanzas
| Searching4Truth chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Wow, beautifully descriptive and captures the emotion in a simple and true way. I love it. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)
P.S. Thank you for your nice review.
| KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
woah, nice. keep up the great work. beautifully described.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| Infection chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
this was a very interesting, poem which was well written.
| Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
This triggers such powerful emotions.
And I can truly say that I have had to struggle to shore lately...
Well done! And thank you for the imagery. -Kat