|Reviews for To Love You More|
| taylor chapter 40 . 5/13/2012
Soooooooo sad i cry iwish she didnt die but its actually a good way to end a book but i never wanted her to die and did he really cheat on her
| akaCHEEKS chapter 40 . 6/16/2009
i remember reading this story a while back. really touched me. just adding it to my favorites!
| Liquid Spear Waltz chapter 40 . 7/17/2008
Aw c'mon! This story is too sad...write the sequel! Quickly, lmao.
Hey guys check out my original story! I'm sure you'll all like it ;p
| xxcanyouseemexx chapter 40 . 5/27/2008
so sad :(
love it though
| izzo17 chapter 40 . 7/29/2007
u mean person
oh when i saw romance/tragedy
i never expected our dear heroine to die!
oh well, it was good and im sitting here in tears right now
i enjoyed reading ur story. Absolutely heart warming (and 'stabbing' too of course)
| izzo17 chapter 2 . 7/29/2007
less dialogue, and transform them into a nice detailed paragraph may be?
but it's good, i like it
| izzo17 chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
i like the first chapter already
love where this is leading to and all
but i must say you could have written the introductions of the characters differently, introduce them as they come along instead of just dropping this chunk of information
[your method would probably work if it was on TV (a voice over or something)]
| akaBUNKiE chapter 40 . 7/20/2006
that was such a god ending! i loved it! every single word, sentence, and paragraph! it was that good... omg... i was crying in the middle.. you should've just called it Respect Her Silence instead of to love you more.. you make it sound like a soap opera... hehe.. but i guess that's cool.. but hey.. you know the song? what is it called and by who? i wanna download it.. haha! lolz i loved this story! it wasn't that long and it was easy to read! i really love how the ending turned out.. it shows that nothing in this world is perfect and that once you lose something important to you.. just don't mourn about it.. learn to move one.. but at the same thing keeping that distant memory with you.. wherever you go... they're never gone.. they're always there with you.. i love it! i really love the ending...
| akaBUNKiE chapter 34 . 7/20/2006
umm.. you know how you keep messing up the names.. like instead of saying calvin you said carter.. and the last names of people.. you would say one last name.. then you would mention them again with a different one.. and how come victoria and abi have different last names? you mentioned it when their mom was talking about how she gave birth to them.. yeah.. sorry... it's just annoying me.. i know you can't do anything about it no more.. but at least try and fix it though... or whatever... you can leave it like that i guess
| akaBUNKiE chapter 33 . 7/20/2006
umm.. i don't get it.. how hard is it to find out that you have a half brother after all those years? i mean... i never even knew i had a different dad until i was like 8! and i wasn't naive back then.. i just accepted it.. even though i grew up with a whole different dad.. cause then my mom got pregnant at a one night stand.. and wellz.. he left.. and she was still with her boyfriend.. yeah.. all that stuff... so i don't get it.. cause i have a lil sis and we're half sibblings.. and we don't care... i guess they're bond is like hecka strong that's why it hurts... wow.. ok...
| akaBUNKiE chapter 32 . 7/20/2006
alright babe.. you got some big mistake on here! really big! first of all... lemme just point out to you that jeremy is 18 right.. cause well he's in senior year high and drives a car... and his older sis died 4 years ago... and how can he be 8? that would make him 12... see the difference here? that was a really big mistake.. abi shouldn't have said that he was 8 back then... it should have been 14... get me now?
| akaBUNKiE chapter 29 . 7/20/2006
ok umm i'm really confused.. isn't like yateh... like... hasn't she always been their friend from before? and Renee.. wasn't that the girl that transfer student from france? or she moved from france.. cause that's what you said when they got introduced.. and i checked too.. you kinda did some mistakes there hun! lolz.. but it's ok.. you had a lot of other mistakes too.. but i just forgot them already.. but the one that stands out the most is the yateh part cause she's like been there since the beginning and Renee is the new girl... you mixed them up girly! just letting you know..
| akaBUNKiE chapter 16 . 7/20/2006
i like this story so far really good... good combo with the twins and jeremy falling for both of them! haha
| Cilissa chapter 40 . 5/13/2006
EvIL! HOW COULD YOU KILL HER!evil! -cries- but it was brilliant. all of it. Evan though i only skimmed the last chapter. and then rewrote the ending. But it was brilliant.
| Charmed Melody chapter 40 . 5/4/2006
*grabs a box of cleanex omg I can't quit crying! This was soo good sad but really good I loved it. You should seriously get this published one day. I'm going to read all your other stuff you have up.. Your going under fave authors and all that!