Reviews for One Step Forward
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Man does that ever suck. I hate bad luck, especially when you end up dead...of course that hasn't happened to me but...whatever, nice poem.
multiples of six chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
Interesting.. it's so short, but makes its point.. I can't figure out how exactly she died, but hey )
fading zero chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
i like this one

shattering glass illusions

-gone-
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Hehe, this is awesome.

Makes me think of a cliff and hesitations. Divine.
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
Short, bitter, and good. I like it.