Reviews for Granddaughter
clarz chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
wow...intense...I LOVE IT...its "beautiful" hahahaha!xoxoxox
sevendeadlypings chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Wow. That was quite a read.

At first, I got the feeling that the grandmother had stabbed granddaughter to death, but the second time around I felt that the grandaughter died because of the train and the knife was symbolic of the grandmother's pain. Either ways, the grandmother committed suicide, that I got.

Hmm...not too sure, but this poem has impact either ways, and it's kinda nice to leave it open to interpretation.
Fatty chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
yo dawg, one of the sickest poem things i've ever read. seriously, man.i cant tell you enough how... how.. deep it was. i mean, i almost had to go get a tissue. but i am strong. i work out 7 times a week. conclusion, wack poem, dawg.