Reviews for A Girl Dancing
citrus scented chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
oh wow. oh holy wow. this just about blew me away. its so breath-taking, the images so exquisite its like I can reach out and touch her, let alone feel the dew-drop air. Her release of pain comes across clear- you capture it profoundly well. The last line, with the mention of hell and the "someone always wathcing ( someone -is- always watching?)" taint it and make that bit more sense. Brilliant, intense, and fantastic piece. I don't know how you do it.
JWren chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
this is wonderful. I love the description.
heart-bleeds-ink chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
That was beautiful. Really excellent imagery.
soi.deliciosa chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
like alot of your work, this paints a pretty picture.I like how its..hmm not exactly vaugue, but lets the reader interprete its meaning(s). great job
Jeremy Kerley chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Great adjectives! Jeremy
physics223 chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
It was a job well done. It was short prose, yet it magnified a quote: Brevity is the soul of wit.

Congratulations.
Edwit chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Hey, that was good. Yeah, the last few lines explain everything. Well, to me anyway. Very nice. A wonderful piece of work.

-Robin
Karismabear chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Wow...I really like it. Great job!
sweetxbliss chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
That was amazing. It makes me think that as she was dancing the wind was freedom of all her problems. Great job