Author’s way of storytelling is so good, I suggest you join N0velStar’s writing competition this April.

This is really good and I should appreciate it if you'd continue it at once!

Nice story and good grammar. It was quite interesting. Please review a story of mine.

oo, wow, this has definately got my interest now! tis v gd, i like it!

Hm...I've never actually read any westerns before. But I would say this is pretty good. A Nice start for me to this fiction genre. Though the whole Cowboy and Indian girl meeting sounds kinda clichet to me. Why not a cowgirl and an Indian boy! Now that's something interesting.

ok i have never rad a western before and ive only watched boganza and into the west a couple of times but i like this keep it up!

Continue quickly, for it is evil to leave your fans in suspense! This is really very good. Most stuff like this people write nowadays is really... fake. This is intense. Keep it up, you've got a good pace going. -