|Reviews for The All American Family life|
| Link-Atrix chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Wow, this is a beautiful poem! You have used wonderful words and you have a nice pace. Nice job :)
| Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Interesting idea, nicely written.
| youzi chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
I think the style of this piece is really interesting, engaging and yet with a chilly aloofness of tone. I like how you exploited the perspective of the young boy in portraying the unpleasantness...and also the question abt the heretics. do keep writing D
| Midnight Lynx chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
There is alot of emotion in this poem,It sounds like a kid dealing with devoirce,I'm really empressed by the way you captured the characters was very well thought and sounds like you felt for this or you could relate to it.I could be wrong but it just seems that work Shakespeare! ~Priscilla~
| Lakoria chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Life; bits doesn't it? Somehow it keeps going though. Good job. I liked your discriptions. Excelent subject. Good use of volcabulary... I think that's about it. I enjoyed it and keep it up.
God bless, Lakoria