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your not the only one whos heart betrays them...thanks for the review and this poem is simple yet very good.

Quite a sophisticated poem, one that I don't find a lot on here. I'm pleased to have found one!

Luv, Anne Hereatta

This poem is adorably written.. aw! What else can I say? This is incredibly sweet and I hope that whoever it is that you're writting about knows how you feel. Well written and I love the descriptions (sp?). I love this! Keep it up!

i like the "involuntary betrayal" part- it's so true, no matter how much you focus on not feeling that way it ust happens...