Reviews for Poems
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 6 . 10/15/2005
you're lucky I understand german haha. but I like this. very well written and I love the flow to it. yes...sometimes there is little hope in this world. a nut mother? wow...

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Sorrowful Dreams chapter 5 . 10/15/2005
time can mean so much, but time can never be on your side no matter what. I like this one cuz some how to me, it proved that point.

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Sorrowful Dreams chapter 4 . 10/15/2005
this one is very well written. Sometimes it does happen when you think it's just the other person...then you join in on what they're doin.

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Sorrowful Dreams chapter 3 . 10/15/2005
I like this one even though it wasn't exactly a poem. but it's good cuz I can really relate and understand what you're going through.

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Sorrowful Dreams chapter 2 . 10/15/2005
once again reminds me of the same song. but I love this one. it has the great emotional detail that made me think...

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Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
very well written. some how the line "hold my hand as I go under, breath for me" reminds me of the song I just posted not too long ago called, "breath on your own" but great work! I like it a lot!

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Nobody-n-Particular chapter 5 . 9/7/2005
A hidden depth.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 3 . 9/7/2005
A sense of isolation.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 9/7/2005
Breathing is all it takes.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I want to stop time.
Freddie of Albion chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Moving...as always...
Tell me its not true chapter 3 . 8/19/2005
i completely get what you mean, i went through a depressed phase, and on the other side it seems almost void
Tell me its not true chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
i love the line 'hold my hand as i go under' it just brings perfect imagery