Reviews for IPT: Oruborus
CatChewer chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
This is EXCELLENT! Favourite part: "Like Christ if hedroppedthe cross and just walked away."Although I liked all of it, how you mixed both formal languange and informal.
1941 chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
I really like your imagery. It is strong and forceful. You also have a talent for invoking the emotions of your readers. Though I often don’t like profanity in poetry, it tends to over saturate the message; I found yours to be apropos. Kudos to you.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Brilliant poem, although the ending sounds as if it should be 'dust or tears' rather than 'tears or dust' for some reason.