was it suicide?

Ok it was good until the last chapter shocks me. Why end it that way? It felt like you just wrote it to escape because you lost steam. It was great before the ending - that just it. Wish you write and plan better for the sequel.

F/F stories, how many times that a popular, sought- after by boys type of girl is our elected resident homophobe... want to see more spunk, get on the drama!

Hey, i'm a vietnamnese and i'm glad that you don't mix up boy or girl name. Really, i've seen a boy named Lien, which actually is a girl name. Otherwíe, the story is a good kind. Keep it up !

Wow...what a nice interesting shoking ending...great great story.i really loved it...i wish it continued...nice work..

well this is a great story, i am sure your newest one will be just as good or even better, please keep going and don't give up, others will see it i know it.

I'm always up for reading something else you publish! Good Luck!

I like the idea of the story. Need to work on the writing a bit.

O_O Aw.. Don't like the ending. :P

XD Alex. Oh Alex. xD

o_O Wow! I wonder how much the phone bill is. :P

Computers are awesome. :P

The song lyrics are awesome. :]

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I already love the main character. xD Awesome hair, Vietnamese! 3 and skateboards? :P I'm in love. O_O Dylan's the best big bro too.