|Reviews for Sometimes, Lord|
| SweetWithUncertainty chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
wow, that was very awesome (in lack of a better word ;) Very inspirational. I liked the rhythm and the truth that rang through-out it. Very well done-SG-ps- thank you for the review. very much appreciated :)
| NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
This is so wonderful. I haven't read such a beautifully true poem in such a long time. This one was like perfect. Great job. It's so very true, the ryhme scheme, the words, everythign is true and perfect.
God Bless you,
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Wow! This is so touching, very beautiful. Excellent write. God Bless ya and keep on writing.
| ice flyer chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
beautiful. you don't need to be religious to appreciate this.. good job :)
| Alhana Starbreeze chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
awsome! I love the rhyming style!
| maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
"Sometimes, Lord/ I simply need to kneel/ And know that your forgiveness is real"... That, right there, says it all! I love this poem. Very simple, yet extremely powerful in emotion. You've been given an extraordinary gift! Keep using it for Christ, and you'll never go wrong :-) God bless! -
| Barbados chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
I think it's great. Excellent flow, and as always, a beautiful... I want to say elegance, but I dont' think that's really the right word. Just soft and simple, yet still powerful and moving. Another addition to your great collection of pieces.
| arwen-evenstar89 chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
this is awesome! i feel like this all the time... but at different times. (if that made sense... probably not.)
man... i haven't read any of your other stuff in way too long! i'm gonna go do that...