|Reviews for Some Resentment|
| One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
The general theme of this poem was really great - really quippy - but I've got to say, I didn't like the rhyming scheme much at all. I'm one of those people who think you should have an all-out rhyming scheme or just not at all - though this is just one of my personal tics, and I know it's annoying of me to impose it upon you, I think I'm morally obliged to as a reviewer! I think you should switch the words around of the two rhyming couplets you do have -
- and make it so they don't rhyme, otherwise it makes me wonder why the REST of the poem doesn't rhyme!
- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in profile]
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/26/2005