Typos aside, this was a very well written piece. You managed to capture the emotions perfectly, intertwining past and present to create a very tragic story. I am glad that Kyle forgave her.

Aww...It's so sad! I like the ending though. Well written.

I love this i almost criedit was great!

Very cool, Very sad. Sounds familiar. characters r familiar, and so is the whole story. i like it very much! good job, im ganna start reading ur other stories! good luck!

holy cow i love this!

very, VERY sad! very!

muchly loves it!