Reviews for man made of ashes
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
This has a different feel than a lot of your stuff. I absolutely love it, though.

Wow, you're amazing.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I can't really relate to this, but I love how you take us to the scene. I especially like the ending. Great job.

Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I get it, I'm a daughter of a smoker as well. Your work is beautiful, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
acrobia chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Simply fantastic...the images you have created, the detail of the ashes and their movements, its breathtaking. I love the way the ashes seem to take the colour away from everything and how you have portrayed this, for the reader, everything seems to face to monochromatic too! It's a wonderful piece. Keep up the good work!xo - Acrobia
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
smoking...terrible. it's weird how many poets use it as a representation of love..tainted love, maybe, something like that.

it's quite the opposite.

i really feel what you wrote. amazing.
Elise Oddity chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
(sigh) I really like this, though it makes me rather sad, as my grandfather died from throat cancer (which came form his smoking habits) and my father is the same.

On another note, I love what you did with formatting ie (dis)taste, things in italics and brackets. It worked very well. Loverly.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
So, so sad. I could really feel this.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Sad! Please read and review!
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
love the imagery and how you incorporate color into this. great descriptions.