|Reviews for A lonely woman's passage|
| Clouden3 chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
That was a sweet genuine piece. One thing I miss about coming here is all the inspiration I would get. Which I definitely got from this. Keep it up girl. PEACE
| Kriss-C chapter 2 . 9/27/2005
This one really made me just want to run home and make sure I don't lose the one I really do Love because of stubborn pride...
| Kriss-C chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
That is beautiful and sad at the same time... It makes me want to smile and to cry... Great Job!
| Kenishiro chapter 2 . 8/23/2005
Great, you made the theme of the poem now a man. sniff... sniff... No that's not my tears, I'm just cutting onions..
| Kenishiro chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
You know what, I hoped that you'll get throught it, nah, don't listen to me, the crazy person who wrote crazy poems towards his "crush"... haha... ignore that, but I get your poem straight away, maybe it almost as close as to what I've felt some-recent-time ago, keep it up!
| Written In Stone chapter 2 . 8/21/2005
ah it's so sad. -cries- But i really lie this. great work. Both poems go well together in the interactment. Great work!
| Written In Stone chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
I really liked this.. and after last night i'm sure I will relate. Awesome work.
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
i loved how you told the poem from both the woman and the man perspectives. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I!
| xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 2 . 8/20/2005
Sad...I proubably would have cried if my mom would have stopped yelling at me for ten seconds. Please read and review!
| xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
How sad. Please read and review!