Reviews for Inside My Mind
eugenio chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Well I know that poetry is hard to judge and comment on because it's very personal, but hopefully you don't mind. What I want to say is that the poem could be in a less straight forward manner than it currently is, just so that the meaning is emphasized. I mean, I know it's a song and it would be hard to have rythm AND be a good wordsmith at the same time for some people, but it's worth the effort I think. Best of luck _
Dyrielle chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
This is brilliant! Awesome song! ) Although the chorus is a little rough, the other stanzas are great. ) I really like the first stanza. Amazing how you could make every two lines rhyme with each other and yet cast such meaning upon them. )
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Nice work! Keep it up!