Reviews for Drowsy
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
this made me cry... I can completely relate.. beautiful poem
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
A very deep and emotional expression of the mystery behind self-mutilation. I like the quotes and the image I got from the whole poem was a girl in the bathub with her razor in one hand and having a bunch of flashbacks about these people telling her things. Very NICE!
sweet raptured light chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
I love this. You did such a good job portraying her emotion and angst. I especially love the last few lines. Keep up the good work
account not in use chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
whoa...brilliance. angst at it's best
Hastatus Regulus chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Oh wow thats an amazing ending line. loved it.
Dark Child chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
oh wow..this is absolutely amazing. the amazing thing about your work is how you can make it seem like you know everything about the subject, like you've spent a lifetime studying it or experiencing it or something...very good work. you will so go on and do great things with this kind of talent.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Awesome poem! I love the way you compared her skin to paper. Thank you for all of the reviews. They are greatly appericated.
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
a well written poem that tells this story well.