Reviews for As You Die
SarahTheTrainer chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Is this based off of the Loki from the Avengers? :D lol i like it tho
karmakaze chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Loki? You're in to mythology. I find mythology fascinating. I like how you incorporate it in your writing, it definately makes it different.

It's okay to laugh at the last line. The idea is the irony of being destroyed, and when the person finally notices they just kind of think "stop being such a mess."

I know there's that whole "don't reply to reviews with reviews thing...but oh well."

Nice work.
AcidxxPops chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Hey, great poem It does remind me of Loki a bit. Keep up the awesome work
Tumbleweedr chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
That is kinda Loki-ish. Hail Loki!