So it's the holidays where I am, and I just read through your story today, and I'll admit I might have gotten myself a bit of an addiction here.

I love Warrick and Jordan. They're so cute together, cause she's not really a show emotion kind of girl, and he's a bit macho.

I also totally didn't expect Raphael to ask out Kale, I hope this means Fox will get his act together cause I'd love them to be a couple.

Sorry for the super long review, I just thought since it was my first. I'm really loving this story and I hope you update really soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Loved it :)

YAHAHA, THAT was TOTALLY satisfying...

:D

I really liked the parts where Warrick is fighting his urge to kiss her...ON SECOND THOUGHT, I actually don't... I WANT THEM TO KIS! :D

Anyways, it was hilarious when Fox and Kale wouldn't go off and Warrick is venting about it!

Keep up the good work! WHOO!

He's planning to what?

That's quite an interesting twist, is he serious? This fic gets more interesting by the second, you have to update soon, I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go.

Oh and, fantastic chapter, enjoyed every scene and the little banter between Warrick and Jordan. I hope their relationship will develop soon, it's like they are at a standstill.

Update asap!

Tecna ;)

Your Welcome! I hope I didn't miss much, and again, awesome chaper :D

you updated ! :D

omg - join the army ? o_o wow he's gonna be fit when he comes back xD not that he already isn't

he's based off a real life person? O_O O.m.g. HE EXISTS ? O_O did he go to juvi school too? or is he just really hot - aww heck. now i feel torn. torn between being thankful that such a guy exists or sadness because he's not mine.

i know i know! edward's perfect (but bella can be a little less whiny and decisive) but i really felt sad for jake. :( I wish HE were real. That would be perfect. ooh ! i can't wait to read that ! same characters, or just the inspiration gotten from the book?

ARMY?

it fits

great chapter!

I don't know if I have ever left a review with this story, if I have then oops, but if I hadn't then here I go...

I love this story! I know I mostlikely say this to every story I read, but I honestly do! Man, I hope Jordan was feeling that sexual tension, because I sure did! Haha. But wow I can't believe Warrick is planning on going to the army (not that it's a bad thing) but it was so heartwrenching to read because anything can happen! When are they finally going to kiss? I'm eager when it does happen! Muaha. Hope you update soon!

omg! i totally forgot to review the last chapter! im sorry! but both chapters were totally wicked awesome! i just luv Jordan and Warrick! and the ending of this chapter was a major bomb! joining the army! woah! Lol. anywayz, PLZ UPDATE SOON! ]

Once again, great chapter! I feel bad for Jordan, though, singing in front of everyone with someone who's actually good. It makes you look even worse in comparison. I am sad that they didn't get some alone time, they deserved it. And I hope the army thing goes okay...

I know that feeling well; Warrick's slight worry.

I had sent off my application and been to meetings and group meetings (to meet with others) before I told my family. I was worried because they are all hippies and hate the army and so on. Meh, you get paid and living is almost free so...

Anyway, awesome story, can't wait to see more of it!

This is a message for Warrick.

If you join the army I am retracting my marriage proposal. Killing is wrong, and it makes me sad that you would consider it. And if you don't make the decision for me - you should do it for Jordan. I very much doubt that someone that full of life would appreciate you going out on a mission of death.

PS, for Master of the Chimps - lovely chapter :) I'm getting a little bored of the supervision they have all the time though - seriously? no alone time? What happens if Warrick breaks the rules? is his father going to send him off to military school? oh wait...

Please update soon :)

Very, very good story.

I wouldn't mind reading over your chapters before you post them. You can e-mail me at blu92jumper yahoo . com ]

Hey-

I saw that you need a beta-reader. I could do that for you. I promise only to change spelling and grammar errors. The only time I might not be able to check a chapter quickly for you would be during the summer months-June to mid-August. Otherwise, I'd be happy to help.

I absolutlely love this story. I cannot wait to find out what Warrick and Jordan finally say to each other about the kiss and hug..

~Molly