I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter.

XOXO,

DeceptionIsMySpecialty

Well if that means Scarry Terry won't get Jordan then I am happy to help keep you from the straight and narrow, hehe! I just loved this chapter though, reunion, and the idea of going on a plane ride with your friends is just so fun!

When they were in the air I kept thinking about all the love webs between the characters and what-if Fox ended up liking Jordan but then I was like oh phew! He's Warrik's best friend obiviously not! Ha! XD

Soo happy! Can't wait!

Lol! That was funny, I love their banter, it's so well written. Jordan's character is also well described, along with all your other characters. I love Jordan's and Warrick's relationship, I can't wait to see what happens in future chapters. I hope you update soon. Brill story.

Tecna ;)

Fabulous story.I'm not an official beta-reader, but I check the sight regularly and could probably get those pesky spelling errors solved. The only problem is I'm leaving in seven weeks to back pack across the UK for a month, during which I'd be no help :P But if you need someone before or after, feel free to give me a try :P

Loved this chapter. The whole story is amazing, actually. Please update soon :D

absolutely loved this update. i worried you had dropped it for a while...but yay, you made my day. thanks so much for another wonderful chapter!

I liked this chapter! Fluff and all, then again im a girl and the thought of Warrick and Jordan getting together, officially, is exciting. Their trip to see him just seems like its going to be full of trouble already.

Finally! Some Jordan/Warrick fluff!

Please update soon! I can't wait to read their first "real" conversation since being apart!

aw...that last part...

*can't stop grinning*

SO SWET!

next chapter better have more of them together!

*waves stick*

YAYAYAY~!

SO CUTE!

I loved this chapter!

LMFAO you 'bickering' with Warrick is so funny. I always do the whole "burn" thing...priceless lol

oh u updated! :D I'm so happy

(though i really should be studying for mock exams tomorrow. :( )

i wish warrick were real. he sounds so hot. yay for Jordan who got to see him finally ! god i cant believe how it must've been after all those months. I hope they make out in the next chapter! xD

i can't believe you read Eclipse too ! I kinda love that series, i can't wait for the fourth book. I felt sO sad for Jake. :( He sounded really hot too and i wanted to cuddle him into my arms and tell him to forget all about her T_T

oh i want to know what happens!

side order of sexual tension, any one?

i did NOT expect raphael asking kale out... good turn of events! i wonder where u will go with this... will u make kale and raphael a happy couple or is it meant to just snap fox into action? DRAMA DRAMA!

pls write the next chapter quickly (i AM waiting at the edge of my seat)

haha. i like :D

haha well he's good what can i say... can't wait till they visit him, hehes... great chapter

I absolutly cannot wait for the next chapter. I simply love your characters. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see how everything unfolds.