Reviews for A Little Bit of Everything
Pipotchi chapter 25 . 2/26/2008
*Twiddles thumbs* ...Just waiting.
Mimerz chapter 25 . 2/16/2008
Excited for the next chapter, I can't wait for the chapter when they're all at Warrick's school for Spring Break! ...I wish spring break would come already for us too...
kirarin242 chapter 22 . 2/12/2008
ah - cries - so SWET!
kirarin242 chapter 21 . 2/12/2008
Really good i hope warrick ok :(!
Inkless chapter 25 . 2/11/2008
wow. i love this story. btw, sorry i stopped reading for a while. i saw it on my review history list and saw that you updated and i was all excited. it's taken quite a sharp turn since the last time i read. bahahahaha, warrick is so cute. you've developed very round characters, so i congratulate you... unless that's not what you were trying to do? CRAPP. okay, but in case you didn't know a lot of times you do that thing where you meant to write one word and instead wrote another word that sounds the same but means something else ... i can't think of what that's called, for some reason... anyway, yeah. so maybe you should try to check for that while you proofread. oh, and try to make sure you're using adverbs where appropriate as opposed to adjectives. and yeah! update soon, por favor!
kirarin242 chapter 18 . 2/10/2008
:( sad!- cries -!
kirarin242 chapter 17 . 2/10/2008
really good keeps it up! :D XD!
kirarin242 chapter 16 . 2/10/2008
Lol really good one!
violet-eyez chapter 25 . 2/7/2008
whats going to happen with her dad
free2love92 chapter 25 . 2/6/2008
great story!

i reallt cant wait to see what goes on over spring break!

BeingMyself chapter 25 . 2/5/2008
Haha, Raphael has a Hakuna Matata grin? What's it look like?

Aw, how could Fox do that to Kale? Poor girl [
superficialSagacity chapter 25 . 2/4/2008
ooh! I can't wait to see what will happen on her trip to visit Warrick! I hope that Jordan won't get discouraged by other people telling her that Warrick's a playboy! Angst makes me MAD! And QUESTION: Are the twins going to be some type of romantic interest in Jordan's life or is this story going to end soon and therefore, they are just going to be friendly characters?
Ck90 chapter 25 . 2/4/2008
wow talk about anger manegement classes! I would totally say the same about my dad if he did not talk to me after 10 motnths then jsut calls to say "Honey I'm getting married!" Update Soon!
RockstarBallerina chapter 25 . 2/4/2008
well yay another chapie! damn that fox making kale cry. O and I am super exicited that she is going to see him for Spring Break woo hoo!
beve chapter 25 . 2/4/2008
wow. so not cliche. *speechless*

“Is there something going on between you two?” He asked suddenly, the words rushing out of his mouth quickly and he looked like he was holding his breath. Why was this so awkward for us? He tells me about all his girlfriends or who he likes, and that never turned this uncomfortable. Of course, deep down it was killing me inside but I never let that show. Maybe it was because I didn’t tell Raphael who I liked? I always said nobody caught my interest and he would just belief that.

I like this part coz normally any other girl would be wondering about the relationship between them and their guy, not the doubts of the friendship between them and their best friend. I like! :D

I also like this part:

Hello body, meet floor. Hey air, say goodbye to lungs.

xD I like your stories. You're getting better! Thanks for making it longer!

"SHA-BAM ::stands up and wiggles fingers::

Warrick: what…

Fox: the…

Jordan: fu-

WE DO NOT SAY THAT WORD HERE ::kicks them and runs::"


Will you be showing more of Warrick's letter?
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