no questions asked, you simply must update extremely soon. This is a fantastic story. Nothing short of frigging fantastic.

hey! Update soon!

so um, you have to update. i've been thinking about it, and it's best not to give you a choice in this, because then you wont update for forever. so if you update i promise not to go ninja on you, i mean i might not sound like it, but i'm pretty awesome a being ninja...okay okay i'm sorry please please just update i promise not to go ninja on you, just update! oh yeah, and awesome story, it's halerious and ahh just so awesome.

Thanks for updating!

Hurry up and update woman! xD -can't get enough of the story- and can you email me when you update if it's no trouble? my story alerts never work T_T

lonewarrior197 at yahoo . com is it if you can ;;

Anyways kickass story I love it so much, your grammars a little off though, maybe proof read it before posting? You'd get a shit load of readers v

wait...can you explain the end of chapter 5 to me? like the last few sentences?

xD Kickass story. loved the end of ch 1 where your begging to randr and warrick like hell no xD keep up the story yea?

heheh I loved it! But thanks for the cliffy, really. ;p

Can't wait for the next update! :D

...dun dun dun...

Aww Warrick, i feel so bad for him! Aw, but i think it's cute that he called Jordan asking for her help. I feel bad for Rafe cause ouch...a book to the face! lol, but I wonder why he's avoiding her? Anyways, great chapter! Please update again soon!

Warrick! No!

Well, you don't update half as much as I would like you to, but I take what I can get. :) This chapter didn't have a lot in it, but what was there was great! Jordan just makes me laugh, her toughguy comebacks and oneliners are so hilarious.

My two favorite lines from this chapter: "That's right, I'd punch Jesus." -and- "I mean, if I'm having his baby and all I can't have him being shot in the head in the bad side of town, now can I?"

It's great how she just took them thinking she was pregnant and ran with it. Keep updating, quickly!

What? You expect us to forgive you? Just like that? AS IF!

Okay:)! You are forgiven! You were missed greatly. Welcome back:D Thankssomuch

~Taylor

very nice chapter...aw warrick's in trouble...poor kale...raphael needs to grow up...fox is by far my fav character at the moment...GREAT JOB!

This wasn't the way I expected the chapter to go from the begining paragraph... but I still like it.

Update soon