Hey, very interesting beginning..Im definately gonna stick around for more.. I like your characters and your description of each of them..Warrick and Fox sound yummy! :P I simply love lip and tongue peircings.. but then again.. who doesn't? DN e ways, write on and update soon! plz? P Much love, Meme

Wow. This is really good so far! Can't wait to see what happens!

Love the author's note.

K3aly

urgh i already wrote this once before the thing cancaled itselfohk here is how it wentjordan - normal, rafeal- ohk too sweetwarrick- interesting in ur headin shortget on with the story already!ciao

Its a pretty cool story. I love stories like this. HEHE! Im totally in love with my best friend and he kinda acts like raphael, but for some reason i want warrick and Jordan together. I think that they wud make a better couple. LOL! Post next chappie soon

Wow! I love long chapters anyway. The characters sound great. This story's already great, so update soon! (Great is the only word i know)PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!:)

omg...*hyperventilates* lip ring? tongue ring? I VOTE FOR WARRICK! hahaha...anyways, yea i think this story is off to a great start. best of luck to ya *pirate accent*...sorry im kinda loopy right now...the whole no sleep and a really really sore mouth thing...damn spacers...ive been living off of ice cream and pudding for the last 3 days...only 7 more days left yippee *rolls eyes*

anyway...im jabbering now, ignore me

Yay! another one...and it is just the kind of story i want to read too...plz update soon...i luv it...the characters are already sounding awsome...great job

omg another great story continue please! *starry eyes* I love your stories they rock, warped tour style! *cough* anyways update plzzupdate! love ya (not in a psycho-stalkerish way though!- too much chocolate ..hyper..damn you snickers!)

Hey! A new story! Yay :) I'll review for Warrick P. lip piercings - so hot. Anyways. Looks good so far. Will we be getting an update soon? P Can't wait.

~ Bai.

great story! i really like how u name the people, GO FOX! lol. :)

New story, yay! It seems promising and i'll look at for more. Even though it is early days, I can already tell that I'm going to have a hard time picking a fave guy over Warrick and Raphael. Love your end authors note ;o)Please update soon. Cheers,

storywritergirl xoxo

I really liked it alot, as usually. keep writing. buwahhaha I like the sound of warrick and fox..fun fun fun

Yay! I like it already. A few spelling/grammar erros but other than that very well done.