|Reviews for Women's Language|
| Leoanda chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
Hey! This was brilliant and so true. *nods* _ Ja!
| Paper Bag Ghost chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Sexist, but funny. If you're a guy I wonder how you would figure this out... If not I laugh.
| miasmas chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
wow this is true. at least for me!
| A'dyn chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
This is the most informative article about women ever
| Celyn chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
That's brilliant! No complaints there... it's so funny!
Maybe you could do the opposite version sometime? That could be fun to see.
| Shadowhound chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
*laughing my ass off. very funny, and looking back, this explains a lot of things about why my girlfriend broke up with me. i should have read this months ago. very funny, but a bit too late for me.
| CK Shorty chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
This was good. It made me laugh. Good job )
| Pont chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Congrats, you have captured the female voice in its finest moments perfectly! _ keep up the good work!
Seemed a little weird at the beginning, but as soon as I got into the flow of it, I couldn't stop laughing. The only suggestion I could possibly give you is to reread over this and see if you can't rearrange a few of the lines, to give it a little more of a definite... direction- which admittedly is hard since the point of this poem is to be kinda random and irrational, but the last two lines don't really feel like the ending... I think it's because this sounds kinda like a one-sided argument (with interpretations :D) and there kinda isn't a 'closing shot', so to speak. (I was kinda looking for it to end with something like, 'it's okay honey I forgive you. -It's all right, as long as I always get my way.) All in all, I think it's very cute _ We know every guy's always wanted to write one of these and mail it to their girlfriends _~